story seems interesting but i dont like the pacing, in some shots the plant is on the floor and the next shes holding it, same goes for the alien chick, one shot she has no legs and the next she does. theres also some shots where the details like the eyes of the plant are just poorly drawn on. the alien chick speaks pretty slowly, i would recommend to edit out or make the pauses between every word shorter, unless this was done on purpose. (cuz, shes an alien and if she just learned how to speak english tthen i guess that would make sense)
other than that i like the style and the story is ok :) keep up the good work